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abeer zaheer
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 |  Subject: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi....  Tue Sep 15, 2009 1:40 am | |
| jinki aankhe ansuoon se nam nhi kya samajhte ho unhe koi ghum nhi log ghum main tadap k ro die to kya ghum chupa k hasne wale bhi yahan kam nhi..   | |
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Aryan1
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:34 am | |
| Kohi Ham Nafas Nahih He Kohi Razdah Nahih He
Faqat Aik Dil Th Apna So Wo Mehraban Nahih he
Inni Patharoh Pe Chal Ke Agar aa Sako Tho aaho
Mere Ghar K Raaste Me Kohi Kehkashan Nahih He
Faqat Aik Dil Tha Apna So Wo Mehraban Nahih
Mere Rooh Ki Haqeeqat Mere Aansoohoh Se Poochoh
Mera Majlasi Tabassum Mera Tarjuman Nahih He | |
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abeer zaheer
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:39 am | |
| pathar pani main mat phenko
usse koi aur bhi peeta hai
zindagi has k jeo
tumhe dekh kar koi aur bhi jeeta hai.. | |
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Bukhari1986
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Tue Sep 15, 2009 2:58 am | |
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abeer zaheer
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Tue Sep 15, 2009 3:01 am | |
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layana
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Tue Sep 15, 2009 11:15 am | |
| WOOOW SWEETY ABEER WELDON | |
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Aryan1
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:47 pm | |
| Laakh Hontoh Pe Tabbasum Ki Kiran Ho Raqsah
Dard Phir Dard He Chehre Se Numaya Ho Ga | |
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layana
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Tue Sep 15, 2009 8:49 pm | |
| huh u know me  | |
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abeer zaheer
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:41 am | |
| thanx layana
aryan i never get ur poetry =P | |
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lonely_sab
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Wed Sep 16, 2009 1:41 am | |
| yaar aryaan ne yeh sher meri behen (layana) keliye likha hai  | |
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abeer zaheer
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:28 am | |
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Aryan1
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Thu Sep 17, 2009 12:39 am | |
| - abeer zaheer wrote:
- thanx layana
aryan i never get ur poetry =P
You will with the passage of time.In fact the subject or content is more important.Eg.Your subject is that those having sad feelings don,t shows their feelings or emotions openly.So here I also try to convey the same message wth the relevent Topic.Although I M not a Ehl e Zaban oir claiming to be the proffessor. | |
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ZalimJin
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Thu Sep 17, 2009 6:53 am | |
| - Aryan1 wrote:
- abeer zaheer wrote:
- thanx layana
aryan i never get ur poetry =P
You will with the passage of time.In fact the subject or content is more important.Eg.Your subject is that those having sad feelings don,t shows their feelings or emotions openly.So here I also try to convey the same message wth the relevent Topic.Although I M not a Ehl e Zaban oir claiming to be the proffessor. This is what i like the most about you aryan, not being ehl-e-zaban, but you got a very good taste in poetry keep it up bro, i got a couplet wanted to dedicate to you, (i wrote this when i was YOUNG), Kehtay hain pichlay waqtun kay log, kay ik shayar tha, Buhut he acha sukhanwar, aur apnay kaam main mahir tha, So Good LUCK! ! ! , please introducte yourself in Intro Section, for others to know more about you. | |
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Aryan1
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| | Subject: Re: jinki aankhe aansuoon se nam nahi.... Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:23 pm | |
| Thanks a lot for your appreciation & a couplet.I will try my best to post selective poetry also decent one. | |
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